IELTS Writing Samples

Response: Among the people, there are many persons who believe music is a midpoint which can conect all the generations and cultures. I don`t think similarly, i think it depends on the song so we are not able to say that point of viwe is always true or always wrong. Inittially, we born in different cultures who have different tast so we rais with completly vary artistic mind.as time past we used to that kind of music for example African and American people are not lestening to same sort of music they will listen kind of music which their brain use to hear, and as i believe human spesious are tend to prove that what they believe in and what they prefer is the best thing in the world. I think like this becuase in my own familiy dispite the fact that we all rais in same culture we have totally differ tast in music some times my mom even says me what i`m listening to is hearting her ears it`s unbelieveble for me!!! While, in Iranian culture there is a singger who whithout any duabt all iranians believe in her voice and we are certainly sure about the matter of fact she was astonishing and her voice was unice. so in this sort of situation that point of viwe which says all generation can conect each other with music is true. also in an universal example i can name Bakh or Bethoven and many many other pianists orchesters and so on who connects the people among the world so it can bring joy and peace for vary cultures. in conclution, i am partly agree but not completely becuase in some situation music is a universal language wich every body underestant and in some, it is difficult to underestant a music which is for a different culture or even generation.

Response: It is often argued whether individuals should do risky actions during their lives, or not. Personally, I believe that the upsides of risky tasks are far more than their drawbacks but both arguments will be discussed further. On the one hand, accepting risks help people to come out of their safety zone and experience new achievements which will bring more success to their lives. Secondly, by taking risks, people will be familiarized with their potential positive characteristics which will be helpful for them to tackle problems. Ultimately, because there are few people who take risks during their lives, they can achieve higher levels in their careers and personal lives. As an example, I should mention the advent of block chains and crypto currencies. When Bitcoin was first introduced, few people accepted it as a currency and a method of payment, but after a few years, it gained a very high value and recognition that nowadays people can compare its value with the actual gold and do their transactions with the help of it. Thus, it is helpful to take some counted risks in order to have a successful life. On the other hand, taking risks may bring some difficulties. In other words, people may loose some time and money in great risks. Other than that, it is not possible to compensate the losses of some risks. Moreover, when somebody wants to take risk, his family members or business partners may not help him to fulfill his want and this reason my prevent many from considering risks in life. Take the disagreement in the Guccie family, as an example, which was about buying cow leathers when they were not cheap enough as they bought them the years before. Because they did not buy the leathers when they had to and it led to an argument between them, they could not continue their production on the scheduled time and they went bankrupt. As a result, not taking risks whenever a person has to, may cost him much money that he/she may not have the resources to compensate. In conclusion, although taking risks in life may bring some disadvantages, personally I believe that the upsides will outweigh the drawbacks by profiting the person who takes them.

Response: In recent years being flexible and take risk play vital role in individual's life and career.AS far as I concerned it has some positive imact which outweight the negative effect such as grab your goal. On the one hand, From psychology prespective as human being we desire to take risk in our life which lead us to become more creative and hard-worker . As a result we may able to achive our target and aims on our job for instance Niki company a couple years ago combine technology with their trainers which can calculate your steps which take notice from customer.This demonstrate the positive influence of risk at business.Furthermore, immigration is a good example of taking risk in our life, immigratin help you to come out of your comfortable zone and experience diverse circumstances for example my cousine has been immigrate to Canada and she is really satistied with her new life and situation.This represents the impact of become flexible in your life. On the other hand.when we do not success in our risks it will impact on our relationship and our friendship finally , we may loss our connection with our loved one due to we do not pay attention to their advice.Moreover, if we take risk and fail , we may suffer from range of mental health disorders such as depression and anxiety also it could considerably reduce our confident which we require to take thrapy for instance CBT approach will be affective. In conclusion , Although taking risk have some negative impact on our mental heal and relations ,I belive it could be beneficial for our businesses and our life which help us to experience new thing and take a risk is more significant

Response: It is widely accepted that a high quantity of food and drink have a high levels of sugar, that causes a lot of illnesses and health issues. A group of people claim that sugary products should be sale by higher price, and as a result people will eat less sugar and sweet products. I disagree with this opinion, and I will explain my reasons. On the one hand, I think companies ought to produce sweetie snacks and drink by less amount of sugar. Besides, Companies can add natural sugar to products like stevia sugar, which is sweet as much as normal sugar, and it is not unhealthy. Not only sugar is not harmful for our body, but also it is an essential nutrient for our brain and helps us think better. People, especially children and athletes have to eat sweetie drink and food, and it is not fair to increase the price of those products. In addition, from my perspective, expensive sweet product is not a good way to convince people to eat less sugar. In my opinion, this action will turn people more greedy, and they will have more desire to eat more sugar. in addition, they will store sugar and sweet products. As a result, there will be a chaos in the market. Due to the sedentary lifestyle, it is crucial for individuals to be more active and eat healthy food. I believe that concept should be taught to the members of society. In conclusion, increasing the price of that kind of products will not be a permanent solution. I believe it will not create any drastic changes. Although, this action will reduce the usage of sugar in a short while, after a time people will eat more sugar and sweet drink compare to the past. Individuals should be aware of the disadvantages of sugar, and try to eat more healthy and have a better lifestyle.

Response: Nowadays, people’s life spans are increasing all over the world. While many people hold the view that an aged society is caused by some difficulties, others state elderly people have several favorable aspects for countries. From my point of view, the benefits of an ageing population outweigh the drawback for the reasons, which are addressed in this essay.     On the one hand, many people are of the opinion that an aged society needs more medical care. Governments allocate a notable budget annually for the medical expenses of older people. Because the elderly are weaker and more vulnerable than the young, so they require more remedial services. Furthermore, most old people have worked nearly 30 years in order to have a pension in retirement time. Thus, they create extra expenses that governments are responsible for paying to them.     From another angle, other people believe that an aged population leads to some positive points like the enrichment of cultural aspects of each country. Elderly people are the main portion of societies that pay intensive attention to culture and tradition. The young particularly children are influenced by their behaviors and advice. Therefore, old people can have a constructive impact on each country’s culture. In my opinion, as well as the abovementioned reason, old people have precious experience, which is very helpful for countries in all aspects including industry, economy, science, etc. Some old people have both academic and practical experience, which they can bring up a brilliant generation.      By way of conclusion, whether an aged population has more advantages than a young society or not is controversial. As far as I am concerned, aging people have positive features and it is fantastic for each country that can take advantage of them.

Response: Nowadays, companies and businesses focus on their innovations and unique aspects of their products in their advertisements. This essay explains why this is becoming common. From my perspective, It has its own advantages and disadvantages. In the end, I will give my personal opinion. We are living on the edge of technology, and individuals are becoming more interested in new products. They are completely aware of the modern technology and a group of people always demand products with higher quality and based on modern technology. Due to the progress of technology, the only way for companies to survive in the market is to be up to date and illustrate their qualifications over their rivals. As a result, it is logical to put magnifier on their innovations. This type of advertisements help them to create new needs for the members of society, and encourage them to buy their new items. It is obviously accepted that it has several advantages. First of all, products by new features make people’s lives easier and more convenient. Secondly, individuals are encouraged to buy more, and it has significant impact on the economy. Finally, the competitional market makes companies to be more into new technology and it creates a great market for intelligent people to be hired and have a decent job. Although the benefits of producing new products with new features are undeniable, it has several drawbacks. New products create new demands for individuals, and unfortunately most of the time people’s needs are not essential, and they buy that product just because it is trend in the society. This attitude leads a large proportion of the population to consumerism. It is widely considered that consumerism has negative effects on the environment. Overall, I believe it is a positive/accepted development at advertising. Not only does it make companies illustrate their positive aspects, but it also helps them to be more innovative and hire people with great potential and talent to make progress in their companies.

Response: It is true that taking risks is important for individuals in their professional lives and their personal lives. In this essay I am going to present drawbacks and benfits of this phenonmen. I beilieve that the disadvantages are outweigh by advantages. To begin with, the most significant benefit is related to economy. individuals useally take riske to increase their income to have better life style. for example, some employees resing thier jobs to lunch thier own business to earn more money. additionally, In some country, people cannot increase their level of life style whit out taking risk. for instance, in Iran people cannot buy a house ,where they family can live there, with out taking morgage. Thus, If they do not take riske to take huge loan, they will not able to buy their own place to live with out the stress of the growth of renting house. on the other hand, this phenonmen can bring health problems. when individuals take big risk for their professional or personal lives find them in stressful situation. a clear example is that starting new business can be challenging and stressfull for people who want to work for self and hire others employee. if they are not sccussfull in their work and lost thier invest, they probably are in denger of heart desease. To conclude, although taking risk have some drawbacks, it is vital to change level of our life style. without taking risk, people probably will not have the opprtunity to level up in their lives.

Response: People are calling into question the usefulness of staying in a job neither are they satisfied, nor they have a high income. While some advocate continuing work in such situations, others dismiss them as completely idle precious time. Both sides of the argument present rational ideas, which will be elaborated. To begin with, proponents of work in bad situations assert that the benefits accruing from it are by no means negligible. A good illustration of this is the scientist who works voluntarily for several years, not only do they work for long hours without attaining a salary, but also their abilities are underestimated, in addition to behaving in impolite ways with them. Indeed, they tolerate these unfriendly workplaces for the sake of obtaining several things, some of which are being skillful, willpower, problem-solving, and data analysis. The more marketable skills they have, the more they are likely to be experts. As a result, they can find better positions in well-known organizations. On the contrary, opponents put forward the argument that working in bad conditions causes some deleterious effects on individuals, hence, job seekers should be aware when it comes to selecting a workplace. The most compelling reason justifying their assertion is that the time and energy expended on working in harsh workplaces can be put to better use in a healthy environment that helps them to foster their aptitude as well as manifest their ulterior talent resulting in having a sense of achievement. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that we ought to consider some criteria such as the behavior of the boss, and colleagues, and ambiance when applying for a job, since it can have both deleterious and positive impacts on our social life leading to either obtaining unprecedented success or failed.

Response: While some companies advocate for trending their new produts by means of advertisement, critics assert that although this approach remains successful for a while; however, it would not last for long, and ultimately, it becomes forgotten and loses its value. Meanwhile, I believe, this kind of advertising depends on the businesses' porpuse, which at most times, is to make a significant short-time profite, and then trend a new product. On one hand, those companies just tend to enhance their sales and profite, therefore, their quality is not always a priority to them. When you choose quantity over quality you achieve noticeable short-time sales, which is financialy reasonable in case that you plan your next move very meticulously. For example, a certain shampo factory in my country, every now and then, comes up with a new type of shampo with different colours and sents, and then, they spend a substantial budget on the advertisemnet of their new product inorder to stay in the market and remain popular among customers. In another case, companies manage to achieve brilliant quality and a good picture at the same time. Those companies, spend huge amounts of money on their tv commercial and urbon advertisemnets just to exhibit their superiority. Furthermore, they claim higher values and costs so that in same ways they assur you that you are not about to waist your money on something unworthy. In another word, their first priority is to stay popular and desireable by individuals. On the other hand, there are many successful companies that have not changed or augmented their advertisements for several decades, and they are still one the top choices of people on the market. For instance, if you cosider the pen company, Bick, you will realize that they have not changed the shapes or quality of their pens for decades and they are still intriguing for their consumers. So, you cannot provide quality and individuals' trust by allocating a huge part of your budget to advertising. Moreover, it depends to companies' intentions to whether present themselves as long-lasting or unstable competitors. In conclusion, investing on advertisement is always a wise and reasonable decision; however, you should not sacrifice other prospects of your business just to increase your temporary sales and profit. Finally, if you desire to stay in the market for long, you would better pay heed to both of your products' popularity and qualty simultaneously.

Response: It is said that some people are of the opinion that people like doctors and engineers who are professionals should work in the same country they trained in, while other people think they can choose freely about where they want to work. This essay will discuss both sides and what I believe is that professionals should be able to work where ever they want. Firstly, there is an idea in which experts should stay the country that they did training because they are aware about difficulities that people face every day and in another words, they know how to tackle the problems far more better than a new person who has no experiment in that country. For example, my father holds a bachelor’s degree in Civil engeering from an university in our country and then started to work as a trainee in same place and got a job after that. As far as I am concerned, now he is an exeptional professional who done many things for this country. On the other hand, as can be seen, there are people who believe doctors, engineers, and other experts are free to choose if they want to work in the same country that they learnt every thing or some other place. Professionals are useful where ever they go and imporvement happens in their presents. For example, a Iranian vet who was interested in Indian animals moved to India after finishing his training to help them prevent animal extinction and had important impact in this occasion. In summary, although there is a belief that professionals should learn and work in same place, I think they can freely go to different country if they want to.