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The Importance of Saving Money for the Future

IELTS Writing Task 2

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7.5
Response: It is believed by many people that saving money for the future and times of need is important for everyone, young people included. I wholeheartedly agree with this opinion, and in this essay, I will support this idea with relevant examples. First of all, I believe that it is crucial for everyone, be it old or young, to save some money for times of need. Take old people as an example. Many elder people in their 60s or 70s are still working either full-time or part-time to make a living and meet their basic needs. Furthermore, there are some people who are financially dependent on their children or even grandchildren to survive from a medical condition. However, if they had made enough saving while they were younger, they would be able to live on their own without the need of anybody’s help. In addition, having a proper amount of saving can really be beneficial for young people by providing them with more flexibility, especially in their professional lives. While many young people end up in a career that they don’t appeal, financial strains will not allow them to quit that job. As a result, they continue to work in an unhealthy environment that can hurt their mental wellbeing. However, if they have enough savings, they won’t be worried about their financial stability and can change their profession with more ease. All things considered, I firmly believe that saving money for future not only helps you in times of need, but also enables you with more flexibility in making personal and professional decisions. Thus, it is important for everyone to have a proper amount of saving.

Accepting vs. Improving Bad Situations

IELTS Writing Task 2

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7.5
Response: There is an opposing view on whether to get along with a bad situation, such as a lack of occupational fulfillment, or try to make a difference. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and explain why I strongly agree with the latter viewpoint. It is believed by many that they should accept what they are dealing with, since it is a part of their destiny and they have no control over it. For example, a number of individuals who suffer from severe diseases do not usually show any willingness to be treated, as they believe their lives have to be like this and it is their fate. Besides, a majority of people do not want to bother themselves and improve the stage in which they are stuck, in spite of being aware of its drawbacks. Some even assume they will be considered greedy if they try to change circumstances, such as trying to get a promotion in their workplace. On the other hand, most people think they should not be content with their current situation. They argue that although human beings must avoid being greedy, it is a part of their nature to have a tendency to boost their quality of life and reach perfection. Moreover, they believe that if primitive humans had not taken any steps toward a more modern life, many state-of-the-art gadgets and cutting-edge tools would not have been created. In conclusion, I believe that not only is it beneficial to change bad situations in order to have a better life, but it is also necessary if we want to witness development in the world.

Accepting vs. Improving Bad Situations

IELTS Writing Task 2

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Complete
6.0
Response: There is an opposing view as to whether to get along with a bad situation, such as lack of occupational fulfillment, or try to make a difference. In this essay I will discuss both perspectives and explain why I strongly agree with the latter view. It is believed by many that they should accept what they are dealing with, since it is a part of their destiny and they have no control over it. For example, a number of individuals who suffer from severe diseases, do not usually show any willingness to be treated as they believe their lives have to be like this and its thier fate. Besides, a mojority of people do not want to bother themselves and improve the stage which thay are stuck in spite of being aware of its drawbacks. Some even assume it is considered as greed, if they try to change circumstances, such as trying to get promotion in their workplace. On the other hand, most people think they should not be content with their current situation. They argue, although human being must avoid being greedy, it is a part of their nature to have a tendency to boost their quality of life and reach the perfection. Moreovere, they believe if primitive humans had not taken any steps toward a more modern life, many state-of-the-art gadgets and cutting-edge tools have not been created. In conclusion, I believe not only is benefitial to change bad situation in order to having better life, but also it is necessary if we want to witness of development in the world.

The Future of Printed Media

IELTS Writing Task 2

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4.5
Response: In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Evidence shows that as the technology is being thrived the e_book would be replaced by the traditional way such as printed newspapers in the immediate future. This essay agrees that physically resources will be diminished and the online books would be filled in this contemporary society as they are not free but also read everything they want. The first and foremost reason is easy access to all sources in Internet. That is to say, individuals capable to visit numerous sites where e_books have been uploaded, to download their targeted book. For example, in recent year in Iran, in 2020, it was done a comparison research between bygone era and current age which enclosed a fundamental change in method of people's providing their books. As a result, after this outcome, it is expected that if this trend continues, online resources would be substituted in the future. In addition to the modern technology has facilitated the readers way to easily availability to books, it also contributes to saving money. This means is that expended pdf form of books are put on website which citizens can afford them free or budget charge.Ultimately, dwellers can take profit. For instance, in Iran the government has launched a website for Iranian who requires book can download them without costly fees. As a consequence, If the online resources had not been, people would not save money, otherwise they ought to pay heavy fees on books. In conclusion, as I assessed in this essay, I'm agree with this statement that printed books and newspapers would be shifted by online resource. This is because, e_books able people to read everything and save money, simultaneously.

The Emphasis on Novelty in Advertising

IELTS Writing Task 2

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6.0
Response: It has seen that, most of the businesses after launching a new product, will emphasise on their innovations in order to prove the difference between their brand new product and other similar existed ones in the market in their advertisement. In this essay I will outline the reasons of this behavior and my perspective about this positive development. To begin with, the main purpose of advertising industry is representing any new product in a creative way to show its differences, superiorities, high quality and its innovation. Moreover, it is crucial to picture a new product’s functions very impressive for audiences due to encourage them to choose advertised brand over other current brands in market. Advertisement must always make individuals feel that their decisions are more logical by not only bringing various impressive reasons, but also by evoking their emotions. For instance, every new cellphone’s advertisement contains many visual aspects which convinced individuals to purchase that immediately. Highlighting the novelty of any new launched product is a positive attitude in advertisement industry. Firstly, every new product is based on human’s need to solve a problem or make life easier. Secondly, todays products always have environmental concerns such as sustainability, recycling, reducing carbon emissions and, decreasing energy usage. For example, new brand automobiles emphasizing on the current vehicle’s pollutions and try to promote themselves as environmental-friendly cars. In conclusion, the main point of advertising is presenting any product creatively and differently in order to persuade people purchasing it, however, the best commercial for a product is its quality and its superiority over other current sample.

The Main Environmental Problem: Species Loss vs. Other Issues

IELTS Writing Task 2

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7.5
Response: While many believe that the extinction of certain species is the greatest threat to our environment, others feel that there are more pressing environmental issues. This essay discusses both perspectives and why I believe that there are more critical issues than the loss of species. There are two main reasons why people might believe that the extinction of certain plants and animals is the most serious issue. The first of these concerns the way that plants and species are interrelated and how the loss of one species can lead to the loss of other species. For instance, if coral dies many of the fish and marine life that feed off it also die. Moreover, many people note the importance of the biodiversity of the planet and point out that when a species dies this is reduced. This biodiversity is important because we are constantly finding that certain species have important applications such as in the field of medicine. However, others consider that there are more serious environmental issues. One of the reasons is that the extinction of a species can be considered a part of nature. For instance, we know that the dinosaurs died out due to naturally changing weather patterns, and life of our planet still continues. In addition, man-made problems are emerging such as Global warming that are so serious they have the potential to wipe out all life on our planet. If the earth continues to experience rising temperatures it will start to become uninhabitable even for humans. In conclusion, in my opinion both sides of this argument have their merits. However, it seems that man-made global warming is the most serious problem because it ultimately threatens to not only destroy certain species but also destroy all life on our planet including humans. Moreover, it seems that we are not taking enough steps to mitigate this catastrophic problem.

Accepting vs. Improving Bad Situations

IELTS Writing Task 2

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8.0
Response: Some believe that it’s important to be accepting of negative circumstances when they occur whereas others emphasise that it’s better to try to seek solutions in such situations. This essay discusses both perspectives and why I believe that the arguments for seeking solutions are stronger. There are two main reasons why people believe that we must be accepting of bad circumstances. First of all, we often cannot avoid bad situations. Since these situations can’t always be avoided it’s best to just accept the reality. For instance, economic downturns can lead to the company we work for going bankrupt and in this case, we should not feel hard done by if we lose our job. In addition, unnecessary stress can be caused by dwelling on our current circumstances. If we are accepting of our circumstances this can allow us to maintain a positive mood and to continue enjoying our life despite a setback. However, others argue that we should have a proactive attitude and find solutions to any negative predicament. The main benefit of this approach is that it may lead to eustress which helps to motivate us to find solutions. For instance, if we lose our job we should focus on finding a new job to solve the problem of being unemployed. Additionally, focusing on solutions can divert some of our negative emotions such as a feeling of bad luck or guilt into more positive emotions such as feelings of empowerment in our ability to solve our problems. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have merits. However, I believe it’s better to focus on finding solutions because it increases the likelihood of solving our problems and maintaining a positive mental attitude, which is far more important than the benefits of avoiding stress through being accepting of our circumstances.

The Importance of Saving Money for the Future

IELTS Writing Task 2

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7.0
Response: Saving up money has become a crucial factor amongst many people, especially youngsters. I completely agree with this statement as putting aside money not only allows for further educational development, but also fosters a sense of reassurance as well as confidence. Nowadays, having access to almost anything is made possible if one has money and resources. Whether it be ecucation or starting a business, money counts as one of the most important assets. Therefore, it is vital for parents to put aside a part of their income to invest in the future of their children. For instance, many american parents are now saving up money every year so that when their young ones reach 18, they are able to go to college and persue further education and as a result, become a distinctive member of society. It is true that money cannot buy happiness, but it sure can buy everything that makes someone happy. Additionally, having enough money, boosts the individuals' confidence and make them believe they are able to manage the upcoming challenges life brings. As a result, people are able to invest in new hobbies which will eventually enhance their mental well-being such as going to the gym or learning how to play an instrument. Such activities reduce stress levels and at times cure depression. In conclusion, I content that saving up money is necessary for pretty much everyone, including young adults. It can help them to follow their dreams and reach their goals conviniently, make them feel confident and allow them to experience desired hobbies.

Accepting vs. Improving Bad Situations

IELTS Writing Task 2

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4.0
Response: In the average world, all the time, there are some times that everybody can love that and the others might not love and as a whole it depends to every person’s characteristic, but what is important is that such people who do not enjoy, do not try to change bad situation or alter their position. The other group do not persuade and try to solve the problem. To be honest I am a person who does not endure in bad circumstances and try handling and changing may bad times. In this essay I want argue about both thinking line. Today’s life through the world is full of different situations that some of them are satisfying and the other can be boring. For example good salary and occupation are enjoyable and the other hand shortage, illness and bad relationship are harmful for most people and in every position some people prefer staying and as a fighter try to control the bad situations. These person have high flexibility and sustainable nature. They believe that bad and good cannot be eternal and after every shortage, this situation will be changed. Investing on positive ability and good point is their belief and they struggle to find and learn big lesson in every unsatisfied period. Other group there is people who attempt to don’t aspect bad thing and always try to control every time. Most of the time they suffer from high scarce and because of this they lose current life and try forget unfavorable things. Actually they live in big denial and this kind of being can born unenjoyable moment for them. Most of them do not recognize their ability and live in mental fight with their selves because their internal and core beliefs of live is happiness and for gain this competition they do every job while most of the time we cannot fine any kind of positive emotion in their life. In conclusion I should say we can not say which of this being is good or bad and it dependent to that job or position and I think both of them is important and the necessarily of thing will define our behavior; what is important is that do not forget or ability and distinguish which type is better and beneficial.

The Role of Competition and Cooperation in Society

IELTS Writing Task 2

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5.0
Response: There is a divided idea in terms of competing in any stages of your life or just do what you have been told you to do and enjoy your life and just try to cooperate, I strongly agree that your life should be just for having positive energy due to have less stress and even creating your workplace or school to a happy place. First and foremost, most of the individuals think that our life is just like a massive competition which we are not just normal humans and we are players who must compete to achieve any successful opportunity in our life. This believe, will have some consequences in our life for example with this vision after a while we will not have any social connection to our society and after some time, people will lose their interest. For instance, imagine a student that has a presentation to make in a world full of stress of being number one in any stage of your life, that student will fail in that presentation because he has so much stress of being the one who is the most complete human in the world. On the other hand, I believe that every human have the rights to do whatever they desire in their life and to cooperate more, although this might be bad influence or lazziness. For example, a person who just cooperates with others in any situation, wheter it is school or work place has a chance to create more friendships, spending more time with others and doing their jobs with less stress because it is not a competition. To conclude, I believe that, at the end of the day you may achieve what you wanted by thinking that you are in a competition, but in order to have less stress and be a communicative human you better do not take life very seriously and just cooperate.
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