Question: In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling in...
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All cars, buses and vehicles will have no driver in the future. Individuals, who use cars or buses, are passengers and they do not have control over deriving. It has its own advantages and disadvantages. This essay evaluates both sides. Overall, I believe that its benefits and drawback will be equal, and neither of them outweigh the other one.
We are living on the edge of technology, and it is obviously accepted that technology has a significant impact of every aspect of our lives, and transportation is not an exception. One of the effects of technology is producing the driverless cars. It has several advantages. For instance, it helps to reduce the number of car accidents significantly. Every day numerous car accidents are happened due to the human errors. For example, driver is sleepy and exhausted, and he/ she has less attention to the road. In addition, drivers, especially younger ones, used to check their smartphone while deriving. All these situations are caused accident by human. Driverless cars focus on driving only and nothing can distract them from the road. As a result, the number of accidents will be decreased if people use driverless cars.
On the other hand, it has some drawbacks. It is really hard to trust to technology and give all the control of vehicles to Artificial intelligence. It is widely considered that driverless cars like all the other intelligence products will have some bugs. There is not any certainty that driverless cars will have no technical issues. For instance, I see some situations in movies that the program of a driverless car has a tiny technical problem, and it was impossible to control the car manually. As a result, it was totally impossible to turn on the car. In addition, fixing the driverless cars need huge amount of money and experts. In this circumstance only a few numbers of members of society are able to fix these cars.
In conclusion, I claim it is completely hard to evaluate the advantages and disadvantages of driverless cars, however I believe it is worthy to use them in the future.
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All cars, buses and vehicles will have no driver in the future. Individuals, who use cars or buses, are passengers and they do not have control over deriving. It has its own advantages and disadvantages. This essay evaluates both sides. Overall, I believe that its benefits and drawback will be equal, and neither of them outweigh the other one.
We are living on the edge of technology, and it is obviously accepted that technology has a significant impact of every aspect of our lives, and transportation is not an exception. One of the effects of technology is producing the driverless cars. It has several advantages. For instance, it helps to reduce the number of car accidents significantly. Every day numerous car accidents are happened due to the human errors. For example, driver is sleepy and exhausted, and he/ she has less attention to the road. In addition, drivers, especially younger ones, used to check their smartphone while deriving. All these situations are caused accident by human. Driverless cars focus on driving only and nothing can distract them from the road. As a result, the number of accidents will be decreased if people use driverless cars.
On the other hand, it has some drawbacks. It is really hard to trust to technology and give all the control of vehicles to Artificial intelligence. It is widely considered that driverless cars like all the other intelligence products will have some bugs. There is not any certainty that driverless cars will have no technical issues. For instance, I see some situations in movies that the program of a driverless car has a tiny technical problem, and it was impossible to control the car manually. As a result, it was totally impossible to turn on the car. In addition, fixing the driverless cars need huge amount of money and experts. In this circumstance only a few numbers of members of society are able to fix these cars.
In conclusion, I claim it is completely hard to evaluate the advantages and disadvantages of driverless cars, however I believe it is worthy to use them in the future.