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In some countries, the majority of people are becoming interested in understanding about the history of the house they live in. There are several reasons for this that I will mention in this essay. To begin with, one reason that people tend to know about the history of the building they are live in is that they can sell it inat higher prices and earn money. As the The more buildings relate to the past time, the more valuable they might be for people, leading to a rise in higher selling with high prices. For example, some houses’ architecture is specificunique due to their history, making them fantasticimpressive and valuable, which can lead to improvementan increase in their prices. Furthermore, people want to know more about their ancestors and heritages byheritage through the history of the house they live in, because of their curiosity or maybe wantperhaps a desire to protect it, and maintain it for their young future generations. Moreover, people can research about the history of the house they live in through their local libraries. In some regions, there are some libraries that maintainpreserve old books about the history of that regionarea, allowing people to access the history of thetheir house they live in. People can also attainobtain information through the from elderly residents who have been living lived there for many years. OldOlder people can often can help peopleothers understand the exact time when the house started buildingwas built. In conclusion, I believe that people tend to know about their houses’ history because of enablingit enables them to sell it in at higher prices, and they may be curious about their heritagesheritage and ancestors, as theythese are valuable forto them and they want to preserve itthem for their next future generations. They can find information about it through their local libraries or by asking from old older people livingwho have lived there for a long time.
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Task Achievement

  • Your essay addresses the prompt by discussing reasons for the growing interest in house history and suggesting ways to research it. However, some points could be developed further for clarity and depth.
  • The example about selling houses at higher prices is relevant but could be more clearly connected to historical value (e.g., heritage status increasing market value).
  • The conclusion restates the main points but could be more concise and avoid repetition.

Coherence and Cohesion

  • The essay has a logical structure, but some transitions between ideas could be smoother. For example, the shift from financial reasons to heritage curiosity feels abrupt.
  • Some sentences are awkwardly phrased (e.g., "the history of the house they are live in" should be "the history of the house they live in").
  • Repetition occurs in the conclusion ("sell it in higher prices" is mentioned twice).

Lexical Resource

  • Some word choices are unnatural or incorrect (e.g., "attain information" could be "obtain information"; "fantastic and valuable" is vague).
  • Avoid informal phrasing ("for that I will mention" → "which I will discuss").
  • More precise vocabulary could strengthen the argument (e.g., "historical significance" instead of "history").

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

  • Several grammatical errors affect clarity:
    • "the building they are live in" → "the building they live in"
    • "sell it in higher prices" → "sell it at higher prices"
    • "because of their curiosity or maybe want to protect it" → "due to curiosity or a desire to preserve it"
  • Some sentences are overly long and could be split for readability.

Suggestions for Improvement

  1. Clarify Examples: Explain how historical value increases selling prices (e.g., heritage laws, architectural uniqueness).
  2. Smooth Transitions: Use linking phrases ("Another reason is...", "Additionally,...") to connect ideas.
  3. Proofread: Check for subject-verb agreement and preposition errors.
  4. Avoid Repetition: The conclusion should summarize without repeating phrases.

Overall, the essay responds to the task but would benefit from clearer expression and deeper analysis. Keep practicing!