Question: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
W...
Click on red question marks (?) to see an explanation for each change. Some changes are only suggestions and don't mean the original is necessarily wrong.
In some countries, individuals prefer to have home for themselves instead of renting home. I think saving money is really significant for some people. So, they believe that with buying home can save more money and this is positive appreciation. Indeed, I have 2 main reasons for my view.
first of all, when people rent the house, they should transport after ending of their constant. So they have to pay lots of costs for transforming. Thus, they try to buy the home and save their income. In some countries such as, my country, Iran, almost of people work hard in order to buy the home because of our adverse economy. we have tough financial situation. Also, annual homes become more expensive than last year because of our high inflation.
secondly, in some countries, individuals feel more relax in their own home and it is important to them. Actually, they can change inside or yard of their home without any stress. while if you rent the home, you would not have allowed that change the decoration. In addition, some people could not grow the plantes in their garden since, they rent the homes and the homes do not belong them. people who buy the home, feel a sense of stability and security.
In conclusion, in some countries that have rising inflation, almost of citizens choose to buy the homes instead of renting them because they tend to have financial investment. Moreover, people feel more comfortable in their own homes than in the rented one.
This section presents vocabulary suggestions. Highlighted words are either too simple or are repeated more than 3 times . Please note that some suggested alternatives might require changes to other parts of the sentence.
This section presents a professionally wirtten variation of your essay and highlights the differences.
In some countries, individuals prefer to have home for themselves instead of renting home. I think saving money is really significant for some people. So, they believe that with buying home can save more money and this is positive appreciation. Indeed, I have 2 main reasons for my view.
first of all, when people rent the house, they should transport after ending of their constant. So they have to pay lots of costs for transforming. Thus, they try to buy the home and save their income. In some countries such as, my country, Iran, almost of people work hard in order to buy the home because of our adverse economy. we have tough financial situation. Also, annual homes become more expensive than last year because of our high inflation.
secondly, in some countries, individuals feel more relax in their own home and it is important to them. Actually, they can change inside or yard of their home without any stress. while if you rent the home, you would not have allowed that change the decoration. In addition, some people could not grow the plantes in their garden since, they rent the homes and the homes do not belong them. people who buy the home, feel a sense of stability and security.
In conclusion, in some countries that have rising inflation, almost of citizens choose to buy the homes instead of renting them because they tend to have financial investment. Moreover, people feel more comfortable in their own homes than in the rented one.