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Question: In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to re...

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In current life, everything has changeschanged and because of technology, the individual’s tendensytendency to paper bookbooks and newspaper havenewspapers has converted to online and people prefer to gain information and newnews without any paying and there is no need for printing and paying. In my opinion, this type ifof being and getting data without money is not true and in this essay iI will argue about my agreeagreement and disagreement. From the first paper newspaper until now, almost everything havehas changed and there is not anything nothing like the past and we can say human's life is divided tointo before Internet and social media and the past. AtIn the beginingbeginning years of the newspapers and radio's birth, anybody were not nobody was able to imagine that one day online newspaper separatednewspapers would spread across the wordworld and with gustjust some click clicks, you can obtain approximatelyalmost all information about anything. Although the Internet and other online broadcastbroadcasts have changed anythingeverything, this type of media needs to continue and without paying monthmonthly payments these bureaubureaus cannot able to survive. For example, Google Company with milionmillions of staff havehas lots of financial problems, management costs, and introduse programintroduces programs and developerdevelopers and something elseother things that whit out without selling information it is not able to pay anyanything. On the other hand, without any money, paying money will help news broadcastbroadcasts to increase and update information and without money impulsefinancial incentive most journalistjournalists prefer not to do not work stronglyhard and these leadthis leads to reducing ofa reduction in news validity. MariginallyMarginally I should say today in the new world that gaining news and information is not because of books and information and advertisement have had has created a new life and world, there are still people who prefer reading paper, specially especially books, and want and are ready to pay money for this type of media. However, i saidI mentioned disadvantages about free reading i but I can say that most theseof this kind of being free ishas helped to rise readersincrease the number of readers and advertisement and selling workshops and somethingthings like these during free news and bookbooks have attracted milionmillions of readers around the world. In conclusion, iI can say for decidingmaking a strong desissiondecision about being free or not about books and newspapernewspapers and printed or online acsessaccess, we need to assess lot thing they attend to many things and consider all sightaspects of them.
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In current life, everything has changes and because of technology, the individual’s tendensy to paper book and newspaper have converted to online and people prefer to gain information and new without any paying and there is no need for printing and paying. In my opinion, this type if being and getting data without money is not true and in this essay i will argue about my agree and disagreement. From the first paper newspaper until now, almost everything have changed and there is not anything like past and we can say human's life divided to before Internet and social media and past. At the begining years of the newspapers and radio's birth, anybody were not able to imagine that one day online newspaper separated across the word and with gust some click , you can obtain approximately all information about anything . Although Internet and other online broadcast have changed anything, this type of media needs to continue and without paying month these bureau cannot able to survive. For example Google Company with milion staff have lots financial problems, management costs, and introduse program and developer and something else that whit out selling information it is not able to pay any. On the other hand without any money, paying money will help news broadcast to increase and update information and without money impulse most journalist prefer to do not work strongly and these lead to reducing of news validity. Mariginally I should say today in new world that gaining news and information is not because of books and information and advertisement have had created a new life and world, there are still people who prefer reading paper specially books and want and ready to pay money for this type of media. However , i said disadvantages about free reading i can say that most these kind of being free is helped to rise readers number and advertisement and selling workshops and something like these during free news and book have attracted milion readers around the world. In conclusion, i can say for deciding strong desission about being free or not about books and newspaper and printed or online acsess, we need to assess lot thing they attend to all sight of them.
In modern life, technology has transformed how people access information. The tendency to read physical books and newspapers has shifted toward digital platforms, as individuals increasingly prefer obtaining news and knowledge online without payment, eliminating the need for printing costs. In my opinion, the idea that accessing information should be entirely free is unrealistic, and this essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this trend. Since the invention of newspapers, nearly every aspect of information consumption has changed. Human history can now be divided into pre- and post-internet eras. In the early days of print media and radio, no one could have imagined that online news would spread globally, allowing people to access vast amounts of information with just a few clicks. Despite the convenience of digital media, sustaining quality journalism requires financial support. Online platforms, such as Google, employ thousands of staff and incur significant operational costs, including software development and management. Without revenue from subscriptions or advertising, these organizations would struggle to survive. On the other hand, free access to news encourages wider readership and engagement. However, without proper funding, journalists may lack motivation to produce high-quality, accurate reporting, leading to a decline in the reliability of news. While digital media dominates today, some still prefer printed books and newspapers, willing to pay for the traditional reading experience. Additionally, free online content has expanded readership globally, supported by advertising and supplementary services. In conclusion, determining whether information should be free or paid requires careful consideration of economic sustainability, journalistic integrity, and reader preferences. A balanced approach is necessary to ensure both accessibility and quality.
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Overview
Vocabulary Range
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Linking Words
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Spelling
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Grammar Accuracy
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Grammar Range
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Cohesion
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Paragraph Structure
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Task Response
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Here is feedback on your essay based on IELTS writing criteria:

Task Achievement

  • Clarity of Position: Your stance is somewhat unclear. While you mention both agreement and disagreement, the argument lacks a strong, consistent position. A clearer thesis statement would help.
  • Development of Ideas: Some points are underdeveloped or repetitive (e.g., financial challenges of free news). More specific examples and deeper analysis would strengthen your argument.
  • Relevance: Some sentences are off-topic (e.g., Google’s financial issues are not directly tied to newspapers/books). Stay focused on the prompt.

Coherence and Cohesion

  • Logical Flow: The essay lacks smooth transitions between ideas. Some sentences feel disconnected (e.g., sudden shifts between free news and Google’s finances). Use linking words (however, furthermore, on the contrary) to improve flow.
  • Paragraphing: The structure is unclear. Separate paragraphs should focus on distinct points (e.g., one for advantages of free online content, another for drawbacks).
  • Repetition: Some ideas are repeated (e.g., financial struggles of media companies) without adding new insights.

Lexical Resource

  • Word Choice: Some words are incorrect or awkward (tendensy → tendency, gust → just, desission → decision). Use a dictionary or spell-check to avoid errors.
  • Vocabulary Range: Limited use of topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., digitalization, subscription models, environmental impact of print media). Expand your lexical range.
  • Collocations: Unnatural phrasing ("money impulse" → financial incentive, "being free" → free access). Review common collocations.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

  • Sentence Structure: Many sentences are grammatically incorrect or unclear (e.g., "this type if being and getting data without money is not true"). Simplify and proofread.
  • Verb Tenses: Inconsistent use (have changes → has changed, were not able → would not be able). Stick to appropriate tenses.
  • Articles/Prepositions: Missing or misused ("the individual’s tendensy" → individuals’ tendency, "without money impulse" → without financial motivation).

Suggestions for Improvement

  1. Thesis Statement: Clearly state your position in the introduction (e.g., "While online content is growing, printed media will not disappear entirely due to [reasons].").
  2. Paragraph Structure:
    • Paragraph 1: Benefits of free online content (convenience, cost).
    • Paragraph 2: Drawbacks (quality decline, financial unsustainability).
    • Paragraph 3: Why print media may persist (preference, collectibility).
  3. Grammar/Vocabulary: Proofread carefully and use tools like Grammarly. Study IELTS vocabulary lists for media/technology topics.
  4. Examples: Use specific cases (e.g., The New York Times’ paywall success, declining print sales in Europe).

Your essay has potential but needs refinement in clarity, grammar, and organization. Keep practicing!