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Question: In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling in...

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It is widely believed that in the future all vehicles such as cars, buses and trucks will become automativeautomated without driverdrivers. And travellers of vehicles will be only passengers. While driverless vehicles can bring some drawbacks, lI believe that they can be more beneficialsbeneficial for several reasons that I will mention in this essay. To begin with, as the majority of collisions happen due to human errorserror, driverless vehicles can provide people with safety journeysafe journeys, leading to an improvement in quality of life. So, people will travel more, particularly try to go toon long journeyjourneys without being exhausted, and they can allocate their time onto other things rather than driving, leading to enjoyment during their travelingtravels. In addition, these vehicles will give an opportunity to travel independently forto certain people who are physically disabledisabled or are not allowed to takeobtain a licence, certificate such as adolescenceadolescents, helping their parents to spend their time on other tasks. For example, if their school areis far awayfrom home, they do not need to go to back with them. On the other hand, there are several drawbacks ofto traveling with driverless vehicles. Firstly, it can lead to unemployment offor drivers. Many of individuals, working as drivers of buses, trucks, and taxi, that if they taxis may lose their jobs, can which could adversely affect on their families. For instance, for some drivers, it may take a long time to find a new job due to a lack of talentskills in other skillsareas, making their families suffer from poor economyfinancial hardship. Furthermore, driverless vehicles can be dangerous as they are without drivers,; they may be hacked easily and create problems for passengers, for. For example, if their systems become disruptivedisrupted, passengers willmay lose their destinations. In conclusion, while traveling without driver cabdrivers can bring some negative impactimpacts on drivers and passengers, lI firmly believe that its benefits outweigh its drawbacks due to its potential to bringprovide safety, and a sense of satisfaction.
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It is widely believed that in the future all vehicles such as cars, buses and trucks become automative without driver. And travellers of vehicles will be only passengers. While driverless vehicles can bring some drawbacks, l believe that they can be more beneficials for several that I will mention in this essay
It is widely believed that in the future, all vehicles such as cars, buses, and trucks will become automated, operating without drivers. Passengers will be the sole occupants of these vehicles. While driverless vehicles may present some drawbacks, I believe they offer significant benefits, which I will discuss in this essay.
To begin with, as the majority of collisions happen due to human errors, driverless vehicles can provide people with safety journey, leading to improvement in quality of life. So, people will travel more, particularly try to go to long journey without being exhausted, and they can allocate their time on other things rather than driving, leading to enjoyment during their traveling. In addition, these vehicles will give an opportunity to travel independently for certain people who are physically disable or are not allowed to take licence certificate such as adolescence, helping their parents to spend their time on other tasks. For example, if their school are far away home, they do not need to go to back them.
To begin with, since the majority of collisions occur due to human error, driverless vehicles can provide safer journeys, improving overall quality of life. As a result, people will be able to travel more frequently, especially on long journeys, without experiencing fatigue. They can also allocate their time to other activities instead of driving, enhancing their travel experience. Additionally, these vehicles will enable independent travel for individuals who are physically disabled or ineligible for a driver’s license, such as adolescents. This would allow their parents to focus on other responsibilities. For example, if a child’s school is far from home, parents would no longer need to transport them.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks of traveling with driverless vehicles. Firstly, it can lead to unemployment of drivers. Many of individuals, working as drivers of buses, trucks, and taxi, that if they lose their jobs can adversely affect on their families. For instance, for some drivers, it may take a long time to find a new job due to lack of talent in other skills, making their families suffer from poor economy. Furthermore, driverless vehicles can be dangerous as they are without drivers, they may be hacked easily and create problems for passengers, for example, if their systems become disruptive, passengers will lose their destinations.
On the other hand, there are drawbacks to driverless vehicles. Firstly, they may lead to unemployment among professional drivers. Many individuals working as bus, truck, or taxi drivers could lose their jobs, negatively impacting their families. For some, finding new employment may be difficult due to a lack of transferable skills, potentially causing financial hardship. Furthermore, driverless vehicles could pose security risks, as they may be vulnerable to hacking. If their systems malfunction, passengers could face disruptions or even lose their way.
In conclusion, while traveling without driver cab bring some negative impact on drivers and passengers, l firmly believe that its benefits outweigh its drawbacks due to its potential to bring safety, and a sense of satisfaction.
In conclusion, while autonomous vehicles may have some negative consequences for drivers and passengers, I firmly believe their benefits—such as increased safety and convenience—outweigh the drawbacks.
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Task Achievement

  • Your essay addresses the prompt and presents a clear position (advantages outweigh disadvantages). However, the introduction could be more concise and better structured. Avoid repeating the prompt word-for-word; instead, paraphrase it more effectively.
  • The advantages (safety, convenience, accessibility for disabled people) are well-explained, but some points could be developed further with stronger examples.
  • The disadvantages (unemployment, hacking risks) are relevant but could be supported with more specific evidence or data to strengthen your argument.
  • The conclusion restates your position but could be more impactful by summarizing key points more clearly.

Coherence and Cohesion

  • The essay has a logical structure (introduction, body paragraphs for advantages and disadvantages, conclusion). However, some transitions between ideas could be smoother.
  • Some sentences are awkwardly phrased (e.g., "leading to improvement in quality of life" → "leading to an improved quality of life"). Work on clarity and fluency.
  • The second body paragraph jumps between unemployment and hacking risks without clear linking phrases. Consider separating these into distinct paragraphs or using better transitions.

Lexical Resource

  • There are some spelling and word choice errors ("beneficials" → "benefits", "automative" → "automated", "disable" → "disabled"). Proofreading would help.
  • Some phrases are repetitive (e.g., "driverless vehicles" appears too often; vary with synonyms like "autonomous cars").
  • Vocabulary is generally appropriate, but more precise and sophisticated word choices would improve the essay (e.g., "adolescence" should be "adolescents").

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

  • There are several grammatical errors:
    • "l believe" → "I believe" (capitalization)
    • "can bring some drawbacks, l believe" → "can bring some drawbacks, I believe"
    • "helping their parents to spend their time on other tasks" → "allowing their parents to spend time on other tasks"
    • "if their systems become disruptive" → "if their systems malfunction"
  • Some sentences are fragmented or unclear (e.g., "Many of individuals, working as drivers of buses, trucks, and taxi, that if they lose their jobs can adversely affect on their families."). This should be rephrased for clarity.
  • Work on subject-verb agreement ("Many individuals... lose their jobs, which can adversely affect their families.").

Suggestions for Improvement

  1. Revise the introduction – Avoid copying the prompt directly; paraphrase more effectively.
  2. Strengthen examples – Provide more concrete evidence (e.g., statistics on accidents caused by human error).
  3. Improve transitions – Use linking words ("Moreover," "However," "On the contrary") to connect ideas smoothly.
  4. Proofread for grammar and spelling – Pay attention to capitalization, word forms, and sentence structure.
  5. Expand on key points – Some arguments (e.g., hacking risks) need deeper analysis.

Overall, your essay presents a balanced discussion, but refining clarity, grammar, and supporting details would make it stronger. Keep practicing!