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In some nations more and more individuals are keen to discover about the history and background of the building they live in. In my point of view, the principal reason offor this attitude is to be aware of the stuructutestructure of the building and otheranother cause is knowing about previous habitants inhabitants. The mannerway individuals can get information ofon these isusesissues is to question of their neighbors. In tremsterms of construction, the construction the building materials for constructing used vary around the world, ، and building rules differ as well. For instance , buildings are habitable in most partparts of the countries , whereas it is esssentialessential to have renovations،; therefore , the face of the builingsbuildings remains almost constant over years or maybe it needs some minor chanegs،changes, while the interior parts have been significantly modified. Moreover get, getting information about previous habitantsinhabitants and how they maintaincemaintained the houses are is effective. When it comes to knowknowing about the history of buildings, we can mention the neighbors،, especially the ones who have been living for a long time in that regon .region. Although we can get informed about the history of residential building trough buildings through local autharities ، authorities, in my opinion, the information offrom the neighbors is more reliable for because they are always in presencepresent. In conclusion, the interest of individuals to knowin knowing about their buildings is not only admitted ،understandable, it is also a necessity. By getting informed ofabout the structure and building materials and the way of renovation poeple, people could be more confident ofin their choice of dwelling. The convienentconvenient way to reachobtain this data is to ask neighbors.
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Vocabulary Range
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Linking Words
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Spelling
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Grammar Accuracy
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Grammar Range
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Cohesion
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Paragraph Structure
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Task Response
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Task Achievement

  • Strengths: Your essay addresses the prompt by discussing reasons for people’s interest in their home’s history and suggesting ways to research it. You provide some relevant points, such as concerns about building structure and previous inhabitants.
  • Areas for Improvement:
    • Clarity & Development: Some ideas are unclear or underdeveloped. For example, the explanation of "building rules differ as well" is vague and lacks elaboration.
    • Relevance: The discussion on "building materials" and "renovations" could be more directly linked to historical interest rather than structural concerns.
    • Examples: While you mention neighbors and local authorities, more specific examples (e.g., historical records, archives, or online databases) would strengthen your response.

Coherence and Cohesion

  • Strengths: The essay has a basic structure (introduction, body paragraphs, conclusion) and uses some linking words ("Moreover," "When it comes to," "In conclusion").
  • Areas for Improvement:
    • Logical Flow: Some sentences are disjointed or hard to follow due to grammar errors and unclear phrasing (e.g., "the manner individuals can get information of these isuses is to question of neighbors").
    • Paragraphing: The second paragraph mixes two ideas (building structure and previous inhabitants), making it less coherent. Separate paragraphs for each main point would improve clarity.
    • Repetition: The conclusion repeats points without adding new insights.

Lexical Resource

  • Strengths: You attempt to use varied vocabulary (e.g., "renovations," "habitable," "residential building").
  • Areas for Improvement:
    • Word Choice & Accuracy: Some words are misused or awkward ("stuructute," "chanegs," "autharities"). Proofreading would help.
    • Formality: The tone is sometimes too casual (e.g., "poeple could be more confident of their choice of dwelling").
    • Spelling & Typos: Multiple errors ("esssential," "trems," "regon") distract from clarity.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

  • Strengths: You attempt complex sentences, though not always successfully.
  • Areas for Improvement:
    • Grammar Errors: Many issues with subject-verb agreement ("the principal reason of this attitude is to be aware"), articles ("the stuructute of building"), and prepositions ("question of neighbors").
    • Sentence Structure: Some sentences are fragmented or confusing (e.g., "building rules differ as well. For instance buildings are habitable in most part of the countries whereas it is esssential to have renovations").

Suggestions for Improvement

  1. Plan & Organize: Clearly separate reasons and research methods into distinct paragraphs.
  2. Proofread: Check spelling, grammar, and word choice carefully.
  3. Expand Ideas: Explain points more clearly (e.g., why people care about previous inhabitants).
  4. Use Reliable Sources: Mention specific research methods (e.g., land registry, historical societies, online archives).
  5. Avoid Repetition: The conclusion should summarize, not repeat.

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