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Soon people will be able to read everything they want online for free so no one will spend money on any printed books or newspapers. I am strongly agree with this statement and this assayessay is going to argue that finding information online is easy and Ee-books are cheaper than printed ones. Finding the answer of the to questions inon the internet is way easier than reading so many books and articles to find the answer while by using the use of internet and AI nowadays people have access to any valid information in the less than a minute. In addition, online news channels and websites are providing provide hot news every second so no one needneeds to spend money on buying newspapers everydayevery day and manage the time for reading all the news to find out a general information while all important news are already highlighted inon the internet regarding ofaccording to individual preferpreference. Electronic books and PDF files are less costycostly than printed books since they do not need a separate budget for printing thousandthousands of copies and transfertransporting them to different partparts of the world while e-books just need a short time to upload and download from the internet and are accessible forto all countries. For instance, students nowadays usinguse the internet and online articles for their education and researchesresearch and there is fewerless need to spend hours in the library searching betweenthrough so many heavy books to collect the information they need. In conclusion, people are showing more interest onin using the internet and online resources to find whatever they need since it is easier and online resources are cheaper and iI believe this will lead to disapearingthe disappearance of printed books and newspapers in the future.
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Overall Band Score
6
Overview
Vocabulary Range
average
Linking Words
average
Spelling
weak
Grammar Accuracy
weak
Grammar Range
average
Cohesion
average
Paragraph Structure
average
Task Response
strong
Word Count
sufficient
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Task Achievement:
Your essay presents a clear position (strongly agreeing with the statement) and supports it with relevant arguments. However, some points could be developed further for greater depth. For example, you mention that online news is updated frequently, but you could elaborate on how this immediacy makes printed newspapers obsolete. The examples (e.g., students using online articles) are helpful but could be more specific or supported with data. The conclusion restates your position but could summarize the key points more effectively.

Coherence and Cohesion:
The essay has a logical structure, but some sentences are awkwardly phrased, which affects readability. For instance:

  • "I am strongly agree" should be "I strongly agree."
  • "Finding the answer of the questions in internet is way easier" could be reworded for clarity: "Finding answers online is much easier."

Transitions between ideas are present but could be smoother. For example, the shift from discussing news to e-books feels abrupt. Using phrases like "Furthermore" or "Another advantage is..." would improve flow.

Lexical Resource:
Your vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there are several spelling and word choice errors:

  • "assay" should be "essay."
  • "costy" should be "costly."
  • "disapearing" should be "disappearing."

Some phrases are repetitive (e.g., "find out a general information" could be "access general information"). Try using synonyms or more precise language to enhance variety.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy:
There are frequent grammatical errors that hinder clarity:

  • "no one need to spend money" → "no one needs to spend money."
  • "regarding of individual prefer" → "according to individual preferences."
  • "there is fewer need" → "there is less need."

Sentence structure is sometimes problematic (e.g., run-on sentences). For example:

  • "online news channels and websites are providing hot news every second so no one need to spend money on buying newspapers everyday and manage the time for reading all the news..."
    This could be split into two sentences for clarity.

Suggestions for Improvement:

  1. Proofread carefully to correct spelling and grammar mistakes.
  2. Expand on examples (e.g., cite statistics about declining newspaper sales or rising e-book usage).
  3. Use linking words (e.g., Moreover, Consequently) to improve cohesion.
  4. Vary sentence structure to avoid repetition and improve readability.

Overall, your essay addresses the prompt and presents a coherent argument, but refining grammar, vocabulary, and elaboration would strengthen it significantly. Keep practicing!