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Some individuals argue that advertising is highly effective at convincing us to make purchase. In contrast, others believe that advertising has become so pervasive that we have grown indifferent to it. Although advertising has become prevalent, l believe that it still can grabs our attentions and is very successful at enticing us to buy products.
On the one hand, the proponents of advertising believe that it is greatly efficient at encouraging us to buy things. The most compelling reason justifying this assertion is that advertising can influence on people’s emotion by using some useful strategies, making it a significant tool for brands. For example, if companies want to reach more customers, they can use celebrity endorsement, an important contributor at giving products an exaggerated account, leading to turning us into impulsive buyers. In other words, advertising can use as a method of promotion which is very beneficial for us, helping us to distinguish inferior products from quality ones, resulting in spurring us to buy the goods.
On the other hands, others assert that advertising is so prevalent so it is no longer important for us. This is because nowadays advertisement is seen everywhere such as billboards, televisions, and social media. That is to say, due to the susceptible to a wide range of advertising, we will try to stay alert to the influence of advertising. For instance, if we want to watch a movie, we will encounter an array of advertisement during movie which is often annoying and distracting, leading to choosing sites, not including them. Therefore, we will be less receptive to attention-grabbing advertising messages.
In conclusion, while advertising exists everywhere and it is so widespread, l firmly believe that advertising not only can tempts us to buy the product but it also grabs our attention due to using persuasive methods, such as celebrity endorsement, and targeting customer’s emotions.