Question: In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling in...
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In the near future there will be no drivers for vehicles, and passengers will travel with these driverless cars. Although with driverless cars, the work-force in this area can be allocated to othere high demand jobs, I believe that there are more drawbacks because driverless cars are increadibly dangerous.
With driverless cars, more people can work in other jobs that require more employees. In this economy there is always a lack of human work-force in high demand jobs such as nursing. If drivers get replaced by automatic vehicles, these people can work for other jobs. For instance, in the UAE, there was a high demand in IT jobs, as a result, the government has decided to replace all taxis with automatic ones to allocate the drivers to other high requested jobs. However, I believe that vehicles without drivers are extremely dangerous and the government can manage the work-force by setting a good plan.
Vehicles without drivers can be a threat to people’s lives. Although AI has been taking the places of some jobs, when it comes to driving, it requires more thinking. Vehicles without drivers can be very dangerous and cause car crashes since they are machines that run algorithms and may fail during driving. For example, in 2018, a woman reported that her Tesla car stopped working in the middle of a highway and blocked the road. I believe that there are high chances of car crashes with driverless cars, and they are a risk to human safety.
In conclusion, although driverless vehicles have some benefits such as allocating human work-force to other high demand jobs, the disadvantages are more as it can be very risky for people’s lives.
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In the near future there will be no drivers for vehicles, and passengers will travel with these driverless cars. Although with driverless cars, the work-force in this area can be allocated to othere high demand jobs, I believe that there are more drawbacks because driverless cars are increadibly dangerous.
With driverless cars, more people can work in other jobs that require more employees. In this economy there is always a lack of human work-force in high demand jobs such as nursing. If drivers get replaced by automatic vehicles, these people can work for other jobs. For instance, in the UAE, there was a high demand in IT jobs, as a result, the government has decided to replace all taxis with automatic ones to allocate the drivers to other high requested jobs. However, I believe that vehicles without drivers are extremely dangerous and the government can manage the work-force by setting a good plan.
Vehicles without drivers can be a threat to people’s lives. Although AI has been taking the places of some jobs, when it comes to driving, it requires more thinking. Vehicles without drivers can be very dangerous and cause car crashes since they are machines that run algorithms and may fail during driving. For example, in 2018, a woman reported that her Tesla car stopped working in the middle of a highway and blocked the road. I believe that there are high chances of car crashes with driverless cars, and they are a risk to human safety.
In conclusion, although driverless vehicles have some benefits such as allocating human work-force to other high demand jobs, the disadvantages are more as it can be very risky for people’s lives.