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It is important to consider how people should react in difficult circumstances. While some people think acceptance can be helpful in challenging situations, such as financial difficulties or undesirable jobs, I would agree with those who believe people should transform adverse conditions into better ones.
To begin with, accepting a severe situation can reduce individuals’ stress levels. This is because when people refuse to accept their circumstances, they have to take action to alter unfavorable conditions. Consequently, the process of change often involves risk, such as losing a steady income or facing new uncertainties, thus may lead to more anxiety. Conversely, those facing financial struggles might find peace in accepting their current situation, as seeking alternative could put them under pressure. Therefore, for some, acceptance provide a sense of stability and relief, especially when the potential for improvement seems limited or unreachable.
However, progress is only attainable when someone is open to the possibility of having a different life. For example, consider a person stuck in a dead-end career, monotonous role, if they choose to stay due to fear of change, they might deprive themselves of the chance of find a fulfilling job they are passionate about, but also in the long term, this might increase the hazard of depression and other mental health issues. In contrast, if they take step to improve their situation, such as acquiring new skills or applying for better role, they may achieve not only a higher salary but also greater job satisfaction and personal fulfillment.
In conclusion, although accepting difficult conditions may offer short-term relief, I believe trying to improve these situations is vital to achieving success and personal advancement.