Question: In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling in...
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There is a belief among people, which says, in the near future there will be no more human driver and all the travelling vehicle will be driverless. I assume this as a negative phenomena.
On the one hand, there are plenty of reasons: first of all, many people job is driving. in my country specially recent years, many colloge studants or their dad are doing drivering for university cost, so if we just take their jobs and give it to AI we are actually destroing a popular job, andthat would be bring poverty and consequently, crime to the scociety.
Secondly, I reckon, most of the people are not completely trustful to AI, and i think they are right as this really a sireios chang for the scociety and has an impact for all the citizens.
On the other hand, it may have some benefits. Like time saiving which is somthing that does matter for most of us, if we consider that driverless cars areusing AI for founding the track so they will do the travel by the best way and that is how they help for time saiving. Another benefit that comes frome this progression in technology usage, is multi tasking for example, a student can do his or her homework on the way. in general while they do not need to drive the car they can do anyother activities.
In conclusion, this future planing has its own positive and negative point but i believe it will heart people more than benefite them, as it turn many jobs useless.
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There is a belief among people, which says, in the near future there will be no more human driver and all the travelling vehicle will be driverless. I assume this as a negative phenomena.
On the one hand, there are plenty of reasons: first of all, many people job is driving. in my country specially recent years, many colloge studants or their dad are doing drivering for university cost, so if we just take their jobs and give it to AI we are actually destroing a popular job, andthat would be bring poverty and consequently, crime to the scociety.
Secondly, I reckon, most of the people are not completely trustful to AI, and i think they are right as this really a sireios chang for the scociety and has an impact for all the citizens.
On the other hand, it may have some benefits. Like time saiving which is somthing that does matter for most of us, if we consider that driverless cars areusing AI for founding the track so they will do the travel by the best way and that is how they help for time saiving. Another benefit that comes frome this progression in technology usage, is multi tasking for example, a student can do his or her homework on the way. in general while they do not need to drive the car they can do anyother activities.
In conclusion, this future planing has its own positive and negative point but i believe it will heart people more than benefite them, as it turn many jobs useless.