Question: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three
metals during 2014...
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The presented graph illustrate figures concerning to the mountly fluctuations in value of three various metals over a year 2024.
It is evident that the price of each three material are fluctuated but the nichel witnessed a more sharp fluctuations over a time given.
In first mounth of 2024 nickel was considered as metal which had highest varations across other metales. By contrast, the zinc has most stable price which changed by just 1%. Furthermore, in following six mounth, all metals became more stable in terms of prices. The striking point was the nickel gained most stability and their price fluctuation reached -3%.
By the end of year, despite noticable variation over a year copper kept its position as second material in price fluctuation which reached to realtively same point with January. Moreover, zinc started the process at 1% and ended it at 2% which reflects increase in its change prices.
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The presented graph illustrate figures concerning to the mountly fluctuations in value of three various metals over a year 2024.
It is evident that the price of each three material are fluctuated but the nichel witnessed a more sharp fluctuations over a time given.
In first mounth of 2024 nickel was considered as metal which had highest varations across other metales. By contrast, the zinc has most stable price which changed by just 1%. Furthermore, in following six mounth, all metals became more stable in terms of prices. The striking point was the nickel gained most stability and their price fluctuation reached -3%.
By the end of year, despite noticable variation over a year copper kept its position as second material in price fluctuation which reached to realtively same point with January. Moreover, zinc started the process at 1% and ended it at 2% which reflects increase in its change prices.