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Question: In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to re...

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It is argued that people will tend to do their readingsreading from online sources to avoid spending money on books or newspapernewspapers. This essay totally disagrees with this statement. onlineOnline libraries are not going to be completely free, as they aren't now, alsoand reading from a paper-based base source brings far more joy to populationpeople who are interested in literature. Although it is assumed by many that an Ee-book must be entirely without payment, itthis is not possible. Clearly, running a website or application as an online library has significant costs for developers, and they have to be able to cover expenditures for variety of various items such as providing a good server and the support serviceservices. Also, publishers need to pay authors or their journalists thereforeso that people who work in those careers can keep writing. As an example, we can see that current online books have fees in online stores, and they are providing provide customer service and updated publishespublications. Additionally, paper books give readers a sense of satisfaction, and book-lovers enjoy turning pages while reading. In fact, people are much more involved in the online world and their gadgets than they want to be, and some individuals seek comfort from reading a book in their hand in ana completely disconnected environment. Moreover, turning pages is always followed by a sense of accomplishment, and it is enjoyable to put a finished novel back intoon the bookshelf. For instance, my mother kept all of my childhood stories that she had read to me, and likewise myself, I hold on to any book that I have enjoyed from the beginning. in In conclusion, it can't be assumed that readers will use web-based materials to reduce additional costs due to hidden expenses that online publishers have to afford to continue servicing. Also, the fact that only a physical book can make humans feel fulfilled shouldn't be neglected.
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Overall Band Score
6
Overview
Vocabulary Range
average
Linking Words
average
Spelling
weak
Grammar Accuracy
average
Grammar Range
average
Cohesion
average
Paragraph Structure
average
Task Response
strong
Word Count
sufficient
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Task Achievement:
The essay presents a clear position (disagreeing with the statement) and supports it with relevant arguments. The response addresses the prompt directly, discussing both the financial aspects of online reading and the emotional benefits of printed books. However, some points could be developed further for greater depth. For example, the argument about online reading not being entirely free could be strengthened with more specific examples or data. Additionally, the conclusion effectively summarizes the main points but could be more concise.

Coherence and Cohesion:
The essay is logically structured, with each paragraph focusing on a distinct argument. However, there are minor issues with transitions between ideas. For instance, the shift from discussing costs to the emotional benefits of books could be smoother. Some sentences are overly long or awkwardly phrased, which affects readability (e.g., "online libraries are not going to be completely free, as they aren't now"). Using clearer connectors (e.g., "Furthermore," "On the other hand") would improve flow.

Lexical Resource:
The vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there are some inaccuracies and awkward word choices (e.g., "paper base source" should be "printed sources," "an completely disconnected environment" should be "a completely disconnected environment"). Some phrases could be more precise (e.g., "population who are interested in literature" could be "readers" or "book enthusiasts"). A wider range of synonyms and more natural phrasing would enhance lexical variety.

Grammar and Accuracy:
There are several grammatical errors, including article misuse ("an E-book" should be "an e-book"), subject-verb agreement issues ("online libraries... isn't" should be "aren't"), and incorrect prepositions ("pay authors or their journalists" could be "pay authors and journalists"). Some sentences are fragmented or lack clarity (e.g., "Also, publishers need to pay authors or their journalists therefore people who work in those careers can keep writing"). Proofreading for grammar and sentence structure would significantly improve accuracy.

Suggestions for Improvement:

  1. Clarify Arguments: Expand on why online reading isn’t free—mention subscription models, ads, or paywalls.
  2. Smooth Transitions: Use linking words more effectively to connect ideas between paragraphs.
  3. Refine Vocabulary: Replace awkward phrasing with more natural expressions (e.g., "paper base source" → "printed materials").
  4. Correct Grammar Errors: Pay attention to articles, verb agreement, and sentence structure.
  5. Strengthen Examples: Provide more concrete evidence (e.g., statistics on e-book pricing or reader preferences).

Overall, the essay presents a coherent argument but would benefit from clearer expression, stronger examples, and improved grammatical accuracy.