Question: In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling in...
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It is discussed that in the future world, there will be no human as a driver driversin personal or public vehicles, tehy; they can just play the role of passengers. It means that all the transportation systemsystems will be drivelessdriverless. LiterallyPersonally, I think this change will be a positive trend, and it will bring more safteysafety and more convenience to people. My reasons will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, we all claim that advanced devices and robots, such as drivelessdriverless vehicles, can perform more accurateaccurately and more precise preciselythan humanhumans, and of course, they will have lessa lower error cofficientcoefficient. It is argued that these vehicles are programmed to drive inat a safe speed, and act considerately. Therefore, the accidents'accident rate will decrease dramatically, and we can garanteeguarantee more safety for passengers who will use these high-tech vehicles.
Moreover, these developmentdevelopments in the transportation industry will provide people with more comfortable travellingtravel and commuting. In other words, they can easily relax in a vehicle without considering differentvarious environmental conditions, such as road or even weather conditions. Furthermore, they will have a far better experience during their commutingcommute. However, it is acknowledged by some people that this development can reduce many job opportunities in the driving field. They also claim that many emergency decisions can be made better by a human rather than by a machine. Despite all the above reasons, I think this advancement in travelling proceduretravel procedures can bring more advantages forto communities. Nevertheless, the merits of the driveless driverless vehicles overshadow the demerits.
To conclude, I believe that future vehicles without drivers will play a significant role in improving many different aspects of a society, from the passengers' passengersafety to their welfare.
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Task Achievement
Your essay addresses the prompt and presents a clear position (advantages outweigh disadvantages).
The introduction sets up the topic well, though the phrase "tehy can just play the role of passengers" contains a typo ("tehy" should be "they").
Your body paragraphs discuss key advantages (safety, convenience) and acknowledge a disadvantage (job loss), which is good. However, the disadvantage could be developed further for balance.
The conclusion restates your position effectively.
Coherence and Cohesion
The essay is logically structured, with clear paragraphing.
Some transitions could be smoother. For example, "Moreover, these development in transportation industry..." should be "Moreover, this development in the transportation industry..." (subject-verb agreement and article error).
The phrase "Nevertheless the merits of the driveless vehicles overshadow the demerits" is a strong concluding statement, but "Nevertheless" should be followed by a comma.
Lexical Resource
You use a range of vocabulary (e.g., "precise," "error coefficient," "welfare"), but some words are misspelled ("saftey" → "safety," "garantee" → "guarantee," "driveless" → "driverless").
Some phrasing is awkward ("act considerately" could be "follow traffic rules carefully").
"Far better experience" is a good phrase, but "far more comfortable" would sound more natural than "far better experience."
"Despite all the above reasons, I think this advancement in travelling procedure..." → "Despite the above concerns, I believe this advancement in transportation..." (more natural phrasing).
Some sentences are overly complex and could be simplified for clarity (e.g., "It is argued that these vehicles are programmed to drive in a safe speed, and act considerately." → "These vehicles are programmed to drive at safe speeds and follow traffic rules carefully.").
Suggestions for Improvement
Proofread for spelling and grammar – Small errors affect clarity.
Expand on disadvantages – Briefly discuss job loss and emergency decision-making in more depth for balance.
Improve sentence flow – Some sentences are choppy or awkwardly phrased.
Use more precise vocabulary – Avoid repetitive phrasing (e.g., "more comfortable" appears multiple times).
Overall, your essay presents a strong argument but would benefit from more careful editing and slightly deeper analysis of disadvantages. Keep practicing!