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Question: In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling in...

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It is widely believed that in the future all vehicles such as cars, buses and trucks will become automated and driverless. Travellers in these vehicles will be only passengers. While driverless vehicles can bringhave some drawbacks, lI believe that they can be more beneficial for several reasons that I will mention in this essay. To begin with, as the majority of collisions happen due to human error, driverless vehicles can provide people with safer journeys, leading to an improvement in quality of life. So, people will travel more, particularly attemtingattempting long journeys without becoming exhausted, and they can allocate their time to other things rather than driving, leading to enjoyment during their travelingtravels. In addition, these vehicles will giveprovide an opportunity to travel independently for certain people who are physically disabled or are not allowed to obtain a licence, such as adolescetsadolescents, helping their parents to spend their time on other tasks. For example, if their schools are far from home, they do not need to go to pick them up. On the other hand, there are several drawbacks to traveling with driverless vehicles. Firstly, it can lead to unemployment for drivers. Many individuals working as drivers of buses, trucks, and taxis, if they lose their jobs, can adversely affect their families. For instance, for some drivers, it may take a long time to find a new job due to a lack of talentskills in other skillsareas, making their families suffer from poor economic conditions. Furthermore, driverless vehicles can be dangerous as they are without driveredrivers; they may be hacked easily and create problems for passengers. For example, if their systems become disrupted, passengers will lose their destinations. In conclusion, while traveling without a driver can bringhave some negative impacts on drivers and passengers, lI firmly believe that its benefits outweigh its drawbacks due to its potential to bringprovide safety and a sense of satisfaction.
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Vocabulary Range
strong
Linking Words
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Spelling
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Grammar Accuracy
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Grammar Range
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Cohesion
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Paragraph Structure
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Task Response
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Task Achievement

Your essay addresses the prompt effectively, presenting both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. You provide clear arguments with relevant examples, which strengthens your position. However, some points could be developed further for greater depth. For instance, the economic impact on drivers could be expanded with more specific data or studies to enhance credibility. Additionally, the conclusion is strong but could briefly restate the key advantages to reinforce your stance.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your essay is well-structured with a logical flow. The introduction clearly outlines your position, and each body paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect (advantages and disadvantages). However, some transitions between ideas could be smoother. For example, the shift from discussing safety benefits to independence for disabled individuals feels slightly abrupt—a linking phrase would improve cohesion. Additionally, the conclusion effectively summarizes your argument but could better connect back to the main points.

Lexical Resource

Your vocabulary is generally appropriate, with some strong word choices (e.g., "adversely affect," "allocate their time," "disrupted"). However, there are minor errors and awkward phrasings (e.g., "attemting" instead of "attempting," "drivere" instead of "driver"). Some sentences could be more concise (e.g., "leading to an improvement in quality of life" could be "improving quality of life"). Expanding your range of synonyms (e.g., using "autonomous" instead of "driverless" occasionally) would enhance lexical variety.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Your grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors that affect clarity:

  • Subject-verb agreement: "l believe" should be "I believe."
  • Spelling mistakes: "attemting" (attempting), "adolescets" (adolescents), "drivere" (driver).
  • Article usage: "an opportunity" is correct, but "a licence" should be "a license" (spelling).
  • Sentence structure: Some sentences are overly long and could be split for clarity (e.g., the second sentence in the first body paragraph).

Suggestions for Improvement

  1. Expand on key points: Provide more detailed examples or statistics to strengthen arguments (e.g., how many jobs might be lost, or specific safety statistics).
  2. Improve transitions: Use more cohesive devices (e.g., "Moreover," "Conversely," "As a result") to guide the reader.
  3. Proofread carefully: Check for spelling and grammatical errors to enhance clarity.
  4. Vary sentence structure: Mix simple and complex sentences to improve readability.

Overall, your essay presents a balanced argument with a clear stance. With minor refinements in grammar, cohesion, and depth of analysis, it could be even stronger. Keep practicing!