Question: In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in...
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These days many companies worldwide are emphasizing that their items are novel, in their promotion. This is obvious, promoting has serious effects on costumers and it can be a cause to lure numerous costumers. In my opinion, this is a negative development; because of their mental problems and in some cases it is really unfair.
To begin with, advertising has a broad world and also it has many rules to be a good advertisement. If the promotion is interesting in some cases, it can attract countless costumers. For example, a company has not a fantastic sale in previous year so for the present year determines to design an advertisement that focus on the product is new and has novel features and also advanced quality. Furthermore, sometimes companies are cheating and fooling costumers, it means they use new, novel and some words like these to lure people's attention. Eventually, by launching a fake trend, they attract millions of audience.
I deem this progress is negative and very foul. Indeed, people have false impression than new products; As a result this illusion due to they think it can satisfy their particular needs. In other cases, this is completely unfair because of their mental effects. once a good become trend, everyone want to buy it because it is advertised by many bloggers or influencers.
In conclusion, businesses use this practice to attract new costumers and affect on them to buy their goods; as I mentioned, this will not be a good method if their advertisement is fake and also that is negative development for world and that country.
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These days many companies worldwide are emphasizing that their items are novel, in their promotion. This is obvious, promoting has serious effects on costumers and it can be a cause to lure numerous costumers. In my opinion, this is a negative development; because of their mental problems and in some cases it is really unfair.
To begin with, advertising has a broad world and also it has many rules to be a good advertisement. If the promotion is interesting in some cases, it can attract countless costumers. For example, a company has not a fantastic sale in previous year so for the present year determines to design an advertisement that focus on the product is new and has novel features and also advanced quality. Furthermore, sometimes companies are cheating and fooling costumers, it means they use new, novel and some words like these to lure people's attention. Eventually, by launching a fake trend, they attract millions of audience.
I deem this progress is negative and very foul. Indeed, people have false impression than new products; As a result this illusion due to they think it can satisfy their particular needs. In other cases, this is completely unfair because of their mental effects. once a good become trend, everyone want to buy it because it is advertised by many bloggers or influencers.
In conclusion, businesses use this practice to attract new costumers and affect on them to buy their goods; as I mentioned, this will not be a good method if their advertisement is fake and also that is negative development for world and that country.