Question: In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to re...
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It has been predicted that, as everything is becoming online, no one would rather buy physical books and newspaper. I strongly agree with this statement and in this essay, I will attempt to outline its reasons and provide my perspective.
No one can ignore the effects of digitalization on every aspect of our lives in today’s world. New technologies, specially internet, has made everything easier and more accessible like books and news. Compering to past, the rate of buying books and newspapers has been significantly decreased which is one of the result of digitalization. There are many benefits in online news and e-books which people notice them very soon. Specifically, individual’s behaviors due to reaching news online is so convenient; online news not only are free and easy to access, but also include different points of views of a new. For example, in a society which most of the newspapers forced to have the same idea about an event by government, online news could cover and discuss various aspect of it.
Even though, online books have not been popular as online news yet, the demand for e-book had significantly increased. Some people still prefer physical books because of various reasons. Firstly, the value of hand books are much more than newspapers. Collecting and storing books in personal library is some’s pleasures and hobbies. Secondly, reading hand books has a nostalgic feeling and make more connection to human soul. For example, when someone have thumbed through a book; it feels more special than scrolling a screen. Finally, unlike online news, most of the e-books have payment and make buying physical books more logical.
In conclusion, there will be no demands for newspapers and physical books in future and new technology could updated the current usages of them too.
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It has been predicted that, as everything is becoming online, no one would rather buy physical books and newspaper. I strongly agree with this statement and in this essay, I will attempt to outline its reasons and provide my perspective.
No one can ignore the effects of digitalization on every aspect of our lives in today’s world. New technologies, specially internet, has made everything easier and more accessible like books and news. Compering to past, the rate of buying books and newspapers has been significantly decreased which is one of the result of digitalization. There are many benefits in online news and e-books which people notice them very soon. Specifically, individual’s behaviors due to reaching news online is so convenient; online news not only are free and easy to access, but also include different points of views of a new. For example, in a society which most of the newspapers forced to have the same idea about an event by government, online news could cover and discuss various aspect of it.
Even though, online books have not been popular as online news yet, the demand for e-book had significantly increased. Some people still prefer physical books because of various reasons. Firstly, the value of hand books are much more than newspapers. Collecting and storing books in personal library is some’s pleasures and hobbies. Secondly, reading hand books has a nostalgic feeling and make more connection to human soul. For example, when someone have thumbed through a book; it feels more special than scrolling a screen. Finally, unlike online news, most of the e-books have payment and make buying physical books more logical.
In conclusion, there will be no demands for newspapers and physical books in future and new technology could updated the current usages of them too.