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Question: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. W...

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It has been discovered that people from different countries have various attitudes towards their living accommodations. Some people prefer buying houses, while others would rather rent houses. In this essay, I will attempt to outline the reasons for this preference and provide my perspective. Mainly, the culture and economic status of a country affect people’s decisions. In some cultures, owning a house is not a priority for people, as it is not a factor to define their wealth. As a result, countrymen will invest their money in other options like their business, children’s education, and even buying new models of vehicles. Moreover, the government facilities for people’s accommodations could be encouraging. For example, in some countries, the government supports banks to offer special loans for individuals who want to buy a house and help them through its building and renovation process. In my lived experiences, buying a house is vitally essential. It is not only an investment in my country, but also a lifelong accommodation comfort. There are many advantages to buying a house. Firstly, it gives you the freedom to make any changes you want in your own house, such as redecorating, refurbishing, and renovating. For instance, making any changes in a house’s structure requires the owner's permission. Secondly, due to the annual inflation rate in my country, buying a house provides peace of mind for people, as they have no worries about extending the house contract for the next year. In conclusion, depending on an individual’s culture and economic status, owning a house could be a life goal, and countries and governments have a vital role in this decision
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