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Question: Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines...

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It is often said that these days, it is becoming more common for many sick people to use alternative medicines and treatments rather than visiting their doctor. I believe this is a negative trend because these treatments could jeopardize people's health and prolong the time of treatment. To begin with, alternative medicines and treatments can be dangerous and unpractical. Some alternative medicines are usually associated with harmful side effects that can damage people's health. For example, some people who suffer from heart disease use herbal teas instead of professional drugs, this can not only make them feel much worse but also can create other health issues. Moreover, alternative medicines can make the treatment time longer. Even if these kinds of drugs are effective, visiting doctors and getting proper drugs can treat patients sooner. Therefore, ordinary people cannot diagnose health problems and transcribe medicines. However, some may argue that alternative medicines are usually more affordable than visiting doctors. Professional doctors are usually charged large amounts of money and the insurance systems of many countries do not support the cost of visiting doctors. As a result, some poor people may not afford these expenses and have to try alternative medicines and treatments. Nevertheless, although the cost of visiting doctors is expensive, there are some public hospitals in almost all countries where patients can use various facilities without paying money. In conclusion, In my opinion, this phenomenon is a negative one, because alternative medicines are dangerous and make the treatment time longer.
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