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Question: Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory j...

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Some people are of the opinion that accepting an uncomfortable situation, like undesirable job or lack of money is for the best, while others think that striving to alter the situation is more important. I believe that it is in our nature to achieve more in our lives. Firstly, proponents of accepting bad situations may assert that predicaments are unavoidable. Understanding the fact that nothing in our control can help us focusing on changing what we are capable to control. For instance, a tough economic climate may contribute to loss of money or investment for some individuals. This hard time cannot be altered by individuals. Accepting this unfortunate circumstance can alleviate stress that people experience. Secondly, not everything is in accordance to our taste, and tolerating hardships might allow people to learn how to cope with difficult situations. A case in point is having an unsatisfying job that has a not really appealing work environment. Sometimes people are obliged to continue their job in order to set aside enough money to consider resigning. However, opponents of this notion argue that it is in humans’ nature to desire better things. The idea of wanting better things, and endeavoring to achieve them are intertwined in our belief system. Additionally, not every hardcore moment happens to be accepted. Sometimes a hardship is a sign to show perseverance for mitigating a challenging situation. For instance, experiencing a not really comfortable relationship indicates that an action must be taken to make the relationship more pleasing. Weighing both views, I believe that humans are wired to want more. Even though we cannot avoid tough times, we need to have a stoic mindset to battle every negative situation, and try to alter it to something favorable. In conclusion, although some might say that accepting a bad situation is for the best, in my opinion people need to improve their lives.
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