Question: Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while ...
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We all hear a lot about environmental issues, a global concern about the future of our planet. Nowadays, people argue about what they can do. A part of them agree with using the help of people individually, but others don't think it is efficient. Besides, I agree with people's contributions.
Those who disagree with interfering people believe that environmental issues extended too. For instance, sea pollution overtakes the world, from the Pacific to the Atlantic Ocean, and the ozone layer problem has involved the Earth caused global warming , of of the most serious aspect of issues. This situation can't be handled by general member of the society. Indeed, they claim that these fields need academic education to avoid damages such as chemical poisoning or physical disabilities. moreover, other opinions have been debated.
Contrary to the last view, many people discussed this option that everyone can help solveing this agenda in cooperation with organizations. as regards to their concern for the environment. They pay attention to themselves health. This worry can lead to active participation in investigating solutions for preventing disease and other disadvanages come from polluted invironment. Even if they can't help technically, it's possible to do it in other ways such as contributing money or moral supports.
In conclusion, this quarrel is constant, anyone has an opinion and it discussed above but I think participating in global issues causes a better world by humans preservation and sympathty for our planet the Earth. So I highly suggest that governments should invest in this.
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We all hear a lot about environmental issues, a global concern about the future of our planet. Nowadays, people argue about what they can do. A part of them agree with using the help of people individually, but others don't think it is efficient. Besides, I agree with people's contributions.
Those who disagree with interfering people believe that environmental issues extended too. For instance, sea pollution overtakes the world, from the Pacific to the Atlantic Ocean, and the ozone layer problem has involved the Earth caused global warming , of of the most serious aspect of issues. This situation can't be handled by general member of the society. Indeed, they claim that these fields need academic education to avoid damages such as chemical poisoning or physical disabilities. moreover, other opinions have been debated.
Contrary to the last view, many people discussed this option that everyone can help solveing this agenda in cooperation with organizations. as regards to their concern for the environment. They pay attention to themselves health. This worry can lead to active participation in investigating solutions for preventing disease and other disadvanages come from polluted invironment. Even if they can't help technically, it's possible to do it in other ways such as contributing money or moral supports.
In conclusion, this quarrel is constant, anyone has an opinion and it discussed above but I think participating in global issues causes a better world by humans preservation and sympathty for our planet the Earth. So I highly suggest that governments should invest in this.