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Question: Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required ...

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A group of people claim that educated persons like doctors and engineers have to work in the country that they studied and became an expert. While some people argue that they have to make it base on their desires, and they have this chance to work in every country that they want. This essay discusses both sides. I agree with the second group, and I believe that people have to work in the country that they want to work. In every country, government usually assign a huge budget for universities and colleges and provide great facilities for students. As a result, when a person studies in a country, this person is using public money for personal goals. In fact, the money that other people pay as taxes or other excuses, is spending for his/her purpose. As a result, a large group of people believe that it is fair to make people to work in their country and use their knowledge and specialty to make improvement over there. On the other hand, some members of society claim that it is a personal decision, and people ought to be free to make decision about their career and its place. For instance, young people decide to study abroad, however after their graduation some of them decide to come back to their own country, and serve to their people. In conclusion, I believe that it is more convenient to let individuals to make decision about the country that they wish to work. In this way, people have more passion to serve to the selected country. Not only does it make them happier, but also it is possible to use their experience in different countries. Due to the progress of technology, it is significantly easy to communicate with experts all around the world and use their abilities and knowledge.
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